Hey Sophie, Hannah O Here. Great work on the slide it looks so good! I love how you put in names, I forgot to do that, Maybe next time you could put in what they got? Blog Ya Later!
Hi it's me Elham from Rimu class. I like the slide so much but under slide you don't have to say that you are 10. Your next step is to go and check the spelling and write By with capital.
Hi Sophie it is Tamara here from Rimu Class I love your animation. Do you know how long it took you to make your animation? I like how you have put names on the presents so they know for who they are. Good Job Sophie Well done Blog ya later.
Bula Vinaka Sophie Hannah N Here. I love your animation with all the animals well there was only two dogs XD lol Jk Anyway Maybe next time you could try and fix up your spelling but anyway the rest is all good :) Bye!
Hi Sophie! That is an AWESOME christmas card that you have done I really like the dogs on it! I was just wondering, how long did it take you to make this? Keep up the GOOD WORK Sophie!
Hey Sophie, Milan here This looks like a really good start with the post but when I went in the slide I didn't really get it. I have one more complaint the you spelled animation wrong with the title. I think you were speeding and rushing everything with the slide. Before you publish you could check with the teacher that you could post. Any way you did good. Catch you later.
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Hey Sophie, Hannah O Here.
ReplyDeleteGreat work on the slide it looks so good! I love how you put in names, I forgot to do that,
Maybe next time you could put in what they got?
Blog Ya Later!
Hi it's me Elham from Rimu class.
ReplyDeleteI like the slide so much but under slide you don't have to say that you are 10.
Your next step is to go and check the spelling and write By with capital.
Hi Sophie it is Tamara here from Rimu Class I love your animation. Do you know how long it took you to make your animation? I like how you have put names on the presents so they know for who they are. Good Job Sophie Well done Blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteBula Vinaka Sophie Hannah N Here.
ReplyDeleteI love your animation with all the animals well there was only two dogs XD lol Jk
Anyway
Maybe next time you could try and fix up your spelling but anyway the rest is all good :)
Bye!
Hi Sophie!
ReplyDeleteThat is an AWESOME christmas card that you have done I really like the dogs on it!
I was just wondering, how long did it take you to make this?
Keep up the GOOD WORK Sophie!
Hey Sophie.
ReplyDeleteThis is an Awesome christmas card.
The dogs on it are cute.
How much time did it take to do this.
keep up you great work Sophie.
Hi its Callum Your christmas slide it is Ok it is not the best but good job one makeing it.
ReplyDeleteBlog u Later.
Hey Sophie, Milan here
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a really good start with the post but when I went in the slide I didn't really get it. I have one more complaint the you spelled animation wrong with the title. I think you were speeding and rushing everything with the slide. Before you publish you could check with the teacher that you could post. Any way you did good. Catch you later.