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Thursday, November 2, 2017

THE LAST DOG

                                            THE LAST DOG


                                         
One day there was  a dog and he was sitting on the grass
he only had water so I rang the pet sen there they came and got the dog and I said can I have the dog.they said if it base not a crowe cip I could have him they chicked.For a mike row cip but he didn't so.I was alowed him I said in a happy vose yay I finally have have my first dog.I took him home and gave he food and water he licked me I said to myself what am i going to call you and I called hem luke but in my head I said or I am going to call you luke or anakin I am not to sore  what one I am going to call you...

by Sophie


2 comments:

  1. Hi, my name is Claire and I go to Owairaka District School. This story is quite good. Next time I think that you should check your spelling before posting a post. Is this a true story or is it made up?
    If you would like to see my Blog please look at the address below.
    https://odsclairek.blogspot.co.nz/ Blog ya later

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  2. Hi Sophie, It's great to visit your blog and It's quiet pretty good post, but next time make sure you check your comma's, spelling, full stop, because some of it doesn't make sense at all. BTW good job.

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