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Thursday, April 7, 2016

Daisy Flower


the flower is a daisy flower and my mum is called daisy and my name is sophie and I love my mum and phillip I so love all pets and my school to me a geing and my favourite book is boo the like dog is my favourite game are pool games and gameing wof my tow dogs and 3 cats and gameing wof my fend and my mum and my school fends at my school my favourite fening is my school and my muum my pets are cool pet one of my dogs are a puppy my arear wan is a deg dog my little wan is sallm like a puppy my cats are 2 of them are peg cat my cat is a little kittne cat she is like samolllike is blackie the my kitten cat………….
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  1. UnknownAugust 16, 2016 at 1:58 PM

    Hi Sophie.
    This is beautiful! I love the way that you compare your Mum's name with the Daisy flower. It reminds me of Namaqualand in South Africa, that is full of Daisies in Spring time. It is also great that you love your Mum so much! :-) Remember to use a point, so that it will be easier to know where your next sentence start. Cheers Magriet

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