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Monday, April 11, 2016

the black dog...

The black dog ... is Rocco! 
I am sophie and I am going to tell you about the black dog. is Rocco . it is fun to pat my dog Rocco love me to the moon and black to hem I love to get hem water and food I also have 3 cat at my home it is fun at my home my mum love me so so mach and her phillip ............
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4 comments:

  1. Miss MorganApril 11, 2016 at 4:08 PM

    I love the way you have gone back through and made this make sense Sophie! Great work! Next time remember to put in full stops at the end of 1 idea.

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  2. AnonymousApril 13, 2016 at 2:23 PM

    next time make the words colors SOPHIE

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  3. AnonymousMay 10, 2016 at 12:00 PM

    Nice job on it.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 10, 2016 at 2:00 PM

    hi sophie good job that looks exlient

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