The cat kod blackie the cat the cat is my cat then the was a navre gile her name was hayley and sophie was wof herer cat blackie but hayley is no the cat is mine no no no is sophie. Blackie is I am sophie cat and I all was de sophie cat for my lif I wall we de and sophie sted to shae she sed to hayley we dof kan fav to sher the cat blackie she is cool so so mach I love her to the moon and black to you blackie the kittlen. My faret fen are pet sed hayley and sophie and my mum and my bad ans my sepher bad we all love pet !!!!
Thursday, April 21, 2016
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I love her to the moon is a good statement.Next time you could put some full stops in to help me read your story.
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see how much you are writing Sophie, you have a fantastic attitude towards using your device. Perhaps using the read/write extension - Ask Miss Morgan about it, might help your punctuation. Keep up the great work!
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